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Lament For Miss Elphaba by ~Kaydence-MacLaren:iconKaydence-MacLaren:



Born to a temptress
Whose morals did sway,
Born on a fateful,
Miserable day.

How could Miss Fabala,
Small and green know
Her terrible fate,
And her destined woe?

Rejected by all
From her moment of birth,
Regarded with scorn,
Fright, loathing, and mirth.

Outcast for things
She could not control,
Society's cruelty
Was taking its toll.

All her attempts
To do good deeds were,
Through failure and misery,
The undoing of her.

Slowly her companions
Were killed in the madness.
Even she couldn't save them,
And was consumed by sadness.

Her only true love
Was horribly slain.
She couldn't help thinking
His death was in vain.

Bound to a prophecy
She couldn't recall,
Destined to stand alone,
And finally fall.

Forgiveness for wrongs
Was her one desire
After revenge was complete,
So she could retire.

Her wish was not granted
For his widow had died,
After Elphie's request
Was repeatedly denied.

Bereft of companions,
Save her nurse and her son,
And thought to be wicked
By everyone.

She died by a girl
Only trying to help,
Not knowing that water
Would cause her to melt.

Dorothy asked for forgiveness
Too painful to give,
For the Witch blamed herself
That Fiyero'd not lived.

And as she slowly,
Painfully died,
Not even her son,
Liir cried.

There would be no mourning,
No shedding of tears
For the innocent rebel,
Outcast all these years.
©2006-2009 ~Kaydence-MacLaren
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Based on Wicked, by Gregory Maguire, this is a lament for Elphaba. If you haven't read the book, please note that it probably won't make a heck of a lot of sense ^_^.

Characters (c) Gregory Maguire
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im sorry it took me so long to get to this but you did a great job on it! i dont remember if iv said this but i love your work...see you in school...

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I'm a Edward Scissorhands fan. Plain and simple.

I even wrote a fan-fiction novel about him-[link]
Thankee! You flatter me :blush:

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Even the most beautiful flower must one day wither and die,
Just as the most beautiful moment is ever-doomed to pass...
i just got home(after taste of ketcham) and re-waitched you singing....ill say it again.....you were sooooooooooooo awsome!*attack*(better then in real life right)talk in school...

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I'm a Edward Scissorhands fan. Plain and simple.

I even wrote a fan-fiction novel about him-[link]
*turns about fifteen shades of scarlet before settling on a lovely shade of crimson* I'll say it again: You flatter me.

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Even the most beautiful flower must one day wither and die,
Just as the most beautiful moment is ever-doomed to pass...
There are words. Absolutely beautiful.

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Know thyself and be still.
Thank you!

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Even the most beautiful flower must one day wither and die,
Just as the most beautiful moment is ever-doomed to pass...
I have not read the book, but it's still beautiful. I love your choice of words.

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"Over 676,000 people have been killed by guns in the U.S.A. since John Lennon was shot and killed on December 8, 1980."

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Why thank you ^_^!

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Even the most beautiful flower must one day wither and die,
Just as the most beautiful moment is ever-doomed to pass...
thats sad

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I don't know why I'm still afraid, if you weren't real then I would make you up.

Kolla mina bilder!

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